Further developing our idea

Today our group got together and decided we needed to improve our idea and plan it out step by step so we had some structure.

I recorded a five minute discussion we had (on my phone) and these are some rough improvements we came up with:

• we begin with the girl in the club with blood all over her (this way the audience is immediately hooked
• it would cut back and forth to the girl and then to shots of the club to contrast the shots 
• shots of dead bodies 

We then made a 'most updated' list of our shots:

This will help us create our story boards. 

 

1. girl crying close up 
2. club - bodies in background, not vocal point
3. girl - hands shaking 
4. club -bodies in background, not vocal point (ring) 
5. dress ripped / blood  
6. club - bodies in background, not vocal point
7. her - crying again
8. main characters back 
9. His hands holding hammers / rings 
10. crawling body - above shot 
11. Main character - behind - crack neck 
12. close up of blood dripping from hammer 
13. close up of floor, blood dripping
14. walks over (different angles) 
15. long shot of him hitting body 
16. cut before he hit body to girl screaming 
17. Pan to man looking at girl , standing over body with hammers (he drops them) 
18. walks out casually